Help tell me what you feel about my game's trailer/description. (+GA)

Greetings, again everyone.

I need some help with my game again, however, not a play testing or voting. This time, I need you guys to see what I can improve on my trailer making, description writing, and screenshotting. (I'm bad at explaining things) Because right now, the problem lies in the first look of the game, which may not explain correctly for those who never played my game.

Please don't redirect me to watch other game. as I mostly enjoy and interesting on pure gameplay video, so I just can't understand the first impression video. Hiring is my last reason, though.

Some of you might remember me, I'm making Xenocrystalloid: The Eradications, and post a few time here.

I don't need the Greenlight vote.

Because I'll take it down sometimes in the future for a fresh start...

First, check out my Greenlight page for current Trailer and descriptions.
Greenlight Page

Then, tell me what you think, from looking the trailer and after reading the description. Or a game you think it is like. (First Impression)
After that, read my gameplay below if what you think before matched my player-style-description.

Aside from trailer and description. The HUD and Title name do need changing (Well, too complex to some, too long to remember).

About the game, I need to explain the goal, in player language style. (I hope I don't make thing even more confuse).

• (In short overview) A progressive roguelite gameplay, based on the game mode (current one is survival-exploration-objective based).
• The player chooses a character, fill up a party with NPC Mercenary or Players in Multiplayer, select game mode, difficulty, and region type.
• In the current game mode, the game will randomly choose the area from a pool of selected region type (this means grass region will only have grass area), connected with a travel point in room style. (Think Dungeon that separated in room with a door, except this take place in overworld) Each room will have a barrier and a crystal and other things like chest, artifact, a trader in it.
• The player needs to find two things in the game, An artifact, and a large crystal. (Comparable to a key, and a stair) Which may not in the current area, therefore, need to explore the other area.
• Disabling a barrier will start the 'death arena' sequence, which will periodically spawn enemy while you have to do an objective. (like stay in destinated area, pick up object, etc) After that, the enemy will stop spawn and a barrier will be gone.
• What you do in the game will make the game more difficult. (traveling, disabling a barrier, pick artifact, etc) It's like harder by time, but allows you to AFK and rest between room.
• Once player destroys a large crystal (required artifact), players will return to the menu, and choose to chain another round for more bonus, or restart to get a point and a permanent EXP. (How far you can go stuff)
• If lose or ending the game, the player will lose current inventory, in-game level, and a round-chaining bonus but you have a choice to move the picked item to the vault for the next time for a price. (Softcore/Mediumcore rather than hardcore permanent death roguelike)
• Points reward for playing is used to unlock new stuff. (Characters, ability, perk, equipment, etc)
• Average playtimes per round are about 0.30-1.30 hours, depends on how rush you find the artifact and a large crystal.

There will be a new game mode that may not play like above, except the win/lose reward and randomization. (Like Story mode, and monster hunter-ish mode)

I appreciated your time reading and helping me out.

And The GA, from the bundle, though, more might come.
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