I've been working hard and trying to improve my music after the feedback that I got the last time I did this on the forum.

I just finished a new song (listen here), any feeback is very much appreciated. Please if you do not like the genre don't hate, feel free to listen to my other songs and follow me on soundcloud if you liked it, thanks

Here's the giveaway for all you nice people, 3 copies of payday: The Heist no CV required, ends on friday afternoon, Giveaway

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I have to try this on audiosurf! :D

11 years ago
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:D

11 years ago
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just listen to your song, its good. i like the nintendo sound (i dont know whats it called but i remember hearing it on nintendo nes game). its catchy mid tempo song :D

11 years ago
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thanks man ;D

11 years ago
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hey, that was pretty nice. I listen to a few other one and like them too, great job !!!

11 years ago
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thank you it means a lot to me :)

11 years ago
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I kinda liked it :D

Although...

this might just be me, but the "whoooos!" were kinda unecessary xD

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:) that's fine, we all have different opinions, I think they sounded cool and added a bit of excitement, but thats just me

11 years ago
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I don't like the genere :(
Anyway thx for the giveaway!

11 years ago
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that's alright :) gl on the giveaway

11 years ago
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I dug it, some of the sounds you used gave it a chiptune-y vibe which was cool; sounds like it would be pretty rad in Audiosurf.

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:D

11 years ago
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very cool which program did you use?

11 years ago
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fl

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Not a fan of the genre but it's well done, the kind that you could put into a computer game ;)

11 years ago
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thanks :D

11 years ago
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Good job, I actually enjoyed it. Would be a nice soundtrack for a racing game.

And thanks for the giveaway.

11 years ago
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thank you

11 years ago
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I like it, nice song! :D
I don't know why but I laugh so much every time I hear the "whooo!" parts xD

Thanks for the GA!

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xD

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Not my genre... good job anyway.

11 years ago
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Not usually my genre but it was pretty good nonetheless. A criticism I have is the WHOO! parts. I'm not a huge fan of how it sounds, for example, at 2:13. I wish you would have made them all sound like the one at 2:29. Reason being, the 2:13 one sounds like a person's randomly popping into the song while the one at 2:29 (due to w/e effect you put on that one) sounds more in tune with the song and its sound.

I also agree with the one comment someone made near the beginning of the song... The intro does your track no justice. It was not a very appealing intro, imo, and did not lead up to the rest of the song very well. But again, just my opinion and not being a regular of this genre you can take that with a grain of salt lol. Don't take my criticism as dislike though; I did enjoy the song overall :).

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I know the intro is pretty shit, but I didn't have any ideas for it and got to the point where I was like...f*** it, I'll use this.

I disagree with what you think about the whoo, but that's fine, thanks for your feedback :)

11 years ago
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Loved the song! Pretty awesome tune. Thanks for sharing (and for the GA) :D

11 years ago
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thanks and gl

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As a person aspiring to be an author, I understand the distinct need for criticism and acknowledgement and am glad I can help you out, even if it's in a really small way.

The song is, quite honestly, excellent. A good idea would be to include download links so that your fans can own versions of this as files. Maybe it's just me, but I find an artist much more easily accessible if I can freely download their music. If you plan on releasing an album or EP anytime soon- try working with Bandcamp. It's where I get 95% of my music and it's very user friendly, from a consumer standpoint I suppose.

11 years ago
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thanks man, I am using bandcamp, and I'll make the song downloadable now :)

11 years ago
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the song is nice :D and thanks for the ga :D
maybe the song should have a break at around the 2 minute mark, something to calm down and build up again. just an idea :)

11 years ago
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thanks, but I think breakdowns are overused, wanted to do something different, I usually have breakdowns though

11 years ago
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okay yeah sure it's still your song, i just think i would've liked that more but even without it it is still a good song :)

11 years ago
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Not to shabby. Pretty good stuff, a little more progression or a break somewhere in there but your doing better then me :D

11 years ago
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:D

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Hahaha....this was unexpectedly awesome. You don't do soundtracks for videogames, do you?
Downloaded and saved as a flac.
PS: I giggled at the "Wooooh!"
PPS: Thanks for the payday.

11 years ago
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thanks man, I do soundtracks for videogames :)

11 years ago
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Anything I'd know?
If I wasn't a cheapskate, I'd want to buy, but is there somewhere I can download your stuff from? :P

11 years ago
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just unreleased games that my friends make :P nothing big

and yeah you can download my songs for free at my Bandcamp, just enter 00 to get it for free :)

11 years ago
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Awesome song! And thanks for the Giveaway!

11 years ago
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thanks you and good luck :)

11 years ago
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thanks for giveaway

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I really liked your track Xygon. It's hard for me to describe how I felt about it as I have only poor music vocab. I think some more tension could have been released 1.41 but it goes into that robot sound again. I like the way the different types sounds in the song hit pretty much every part of the spectrum, high and low.

In the spirit of sharing, here's some tunes I made with Dance eJay 3 a few years ago. They were mostly experimental, and probably have too many tracks running so it can sound a bit too busy. I'm a newbie amateur so consider yourself warned before listening! I think I went a bit overboard emphasising bass.

In order from best to worst.
Dance3Mix5v2 This one I tend to have eargasm around 1:30-1:45 and enjoy the way I go from that sort of unpleasant sound at the start to a smoother sound in 0:20-0:30, but I'm not really happy with the way it ends (with a clap). I never could work out how to end a tune. It was a later version of Dance3Mix5 - this one ends with what is imo far too cheesy vocals.

Dance3Mix1 This one I think was a bit too repetitive. I liked what I was able to achieve around 1:56 though.

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It's good, there were too many used parts put together.I didn't really like the jam to it.

7.5/10

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I like electronic music but yours doesn't sound original enough to me; or at least, not that pleasant to listen to. Sorry.

Anyway, thanks for the giveaway!

11 years ago
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Hi, use a bit of reverb and send it too almost all channels (specially those in the middle and high frequencies), it helps to make the mix to match as a whole, in the most of cases.
The leads and complex stuff is very nicely done.

Good luck in music, and don't stop doing it. You will be better with time.
From another musician-producer ;)

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