Why am I not blacklisted?!
Will try it out later! Seems like you put some effort into this and it's a great idea as well! Nice how you executed the idea with the closed threads!
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Now I truly see the advantage of having the first comment. Easy to access and for everyone to see :D
So I went on the little wasteland adventure and I must say, although the English isn't perfect here and there (mine isn't perfect either) it is suprisingly well written considering the content! I really, really enjoyed it. I also liked the self-irony in some bits and that you didn't made this about yourself but about the reader and that you kind of put yourself into the background to make the reader feel powerful and important in a way. It's flattering to read it that way.
I suppose that's the influence of videogames where you always want to be the powerful hero and you gave the same experience with your little game. :D
As for my choices I have to check my phone. Had the tab opened there for days so I could go back and check the choices I made.
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You know what I would've loved to see tho? The chance of being bad instead of helping A or B. Maybe I just took the wrong turn tho.
And for the survivors in the wasteland? I would've chosen to be cautious and thoroughly check them before or after they got in. You can never be sure what their intentions are in this scenario! But I got to choose let them in or let them go. D:
I think I gonna play it again. :D
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I tried to avoid a self-centered story, better give the power in the hands of the players, glad you liked it :)
A first I didn't create bad endings because I linked them to no GAs, just when I wrote all I thought I could add a GA to bad endings as well ^^' Maybe next time :P
Invited sent :)
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Ha, that's a thing I thought about lately having played videogames that gave you the choice of being bad or good and I find it unbearable at times that there seems to be no grey are. You're bad, you gonna get a bad ending. You're good, you gonna get a good one. So it's funny I'm the helper in that ending, because I wanted some bad options throughout the journey but only was able to do good. :D
I also didn't know that the endings were tied to groups! Awesome! Great job! Really... Wow! :D
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So, basically I should punch people in the face so I get to decide what to do. :P
Thanks for the adventure!
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Took Page 1-2-7-19-43-Ending 1. Returning with the stash of food.
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Also went back and took Page 1-2-6-16-36-Ending 2. Returning to the camp with a bunch of new tools.
Am I allowed to take more than one path or is it one path per person?
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I don't meet the conditions to join the group, but it was fun to "go on adventure", thanks! :D
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Invite sent! :)
Oh, the racoon, that's what happened!
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I guess it was much effort to write pages for all the different choices. :-)
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Thanks to everyone who joined my birthday event!
Until the next year! :D
(The Gamebook Adventure can still be found here)
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