Here it is

It's not my first animation, but it's my first that is longer than 20 seconds. I know it is not good but I stopped putting effort into it when I realised it has the exact same plot or whatever as a video that has 17 million views. So toward the end it gets really bad because I was discouraged but when I make an episode 2 I will work on it a lot more.
I just want to see what peoples opinions are of it so that the next video I make is a lot better, so don't abuse me for trying to advertise my videos. BTW, I'm only 14 so that is why it's quite bad.

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Hahaha, very funny!

11 years ago
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Thanks

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Cereal killer, lol. Great stuff for a 14-year-old, keep it up.

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thanks. Yeah, cereal killer is the video which is exactly the same. I released that it was the same when I was coming up with a name. I thought of "Cereal Killer" and then I was like "WAIT! That's already a video and it has loads of views" but I was quite close to finishing it, so I couldn't change it.

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Hah, I haven't seen that I just immediately though of "cereal" killer, when I saw that guy shoot those men like in the Simpsons when Bart plays this game called Cereal Killer :P

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Nice voicing, haha! Good start

11 years ago
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thanks

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yeah, good job, I liked that

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thanks

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Nice work :D

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thanks

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I liked this video :DD It was funny and really remembers me Cereal Killer from Freddie Wong, but be proud of your work! You're young and have potencial :) I would suggest to add a soundtrack in the video, somthing that helps to keep the mood of your video :D
(Sorry for my bad English)

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Thank you. Your English made perfect sense, I would of thought that you were English if you didn't put that at the end.

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The guy said you're good and he liked it, don't be an asshole.

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I was saying how good his English is. How is that being an asshole?

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oh sory i mist8kd. wops.

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Lol, what?

11 years ago
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Not bad!

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thanks

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How'd you make this?

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in flash

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Closed 11 years ago by seamzo.