My first Steam Greenlight submission ( Giveaway added! )

I like the artwork.

Can't really comment on anything else yet, though. Got a vote from me for the art alone, tho.

Awful music + beautiful gameart and they're barely compatible. Looks like interesting, especially for manga fans.

I voted yes since I'd like to see more VNs on Steam. HOWEVER, based on your screenshots, I can see that this game will have a ton of spelling and grammatical errors. You might want to get a native English speaker to run through the script again to fix everything up.

I'll just paste what I said in your Greenlight comments: "I'm not a big fan of VNs, but this game looks like some actual effort has been put into it, unlike hundreds of other games on Greenlight".

Looks nice. I voted yes.

It looks ugly and annoying. A visual novel has no place on steam, so to hell with it, keep your boring non games to yourself on some of your guh, anime addict sites.

Nice art and cool video, you did it too?

"Beautiful gothic style character & scene design"
From what I can see and know this is not Gothic but Lolita.

kawaii <3

What language is it voiced in? You should have a sample of that in the video.

I am intrigued by the art style of this game. Hopefully you do make it on sale to steam. Voted

I'm not really into manga/anime-style games, but this seems a lot more polished and well-refined than most Greenlight games.
Good work, and good luck!

It could use some polishing (art and text) but it'd definitely a real effort at a game (not like some of the other crap on greenlight), so you got my vote.

Nice art. Good luck :)

Looks cute, voted/

once the game is in store, make a giveaway to promote your game and add it to a bundle

Good luck! As noted by a few others, you may want to get some additional proofreading to ensure your localization is done well. Nice artwork, and I personally like the frenetically-paced piano playing.

Voted. Looks like something I'll pick up in a bundle.

game looks nice, but dont like the font u used for the title.

well, the music of the video was a bit annoying.

cant say anything about the anime things....perhaps i am just too old or odd for these oversized eye things

Voted, only advice: Put a lot of focus on the writing/translation. Most eastern games I played or either written like a teenager would or make not much sense due to translation. Have good to great writing and the game will sell.

Oh and... the volume of that video is a bit too high. Almost killed my ears with those tones :p

Giveaway added.

Bump, Baby!

It looks pretty cool

The people here will say they like anything.

It looks just as generic as every VN.