Intro

I like it, but the 2nd intro almost seems like the name of your channel is Welcome Bitches! (If it's actually supposed to be that, then never mind)

WHAT

Not enough dubstep.

Not dubstep. Everyone does dubstep. Get some sick acoustic guitar riff or something.

Drumstep

^>^

The intros suck.

Not bad, they'red pretty average though.

I like the second one better.

1. Don't call your subscribers bitches

2. No dubstep. I can't express how much it is overused and dreadful it is

3. If your channel turns out to be filled with "Swag" and "Yolo",no thanks.

Words of advice~

On top of moondra's advice, heres some of mine:

Don't have a long intro, no one likes long intros.
Make it fade out instead of just cut.

Dubstep and smileys. How old are you? 12? And it's too long.

Dubsteps ... Dubsteps Everywhere

Too long, make it 10 seconds or less.

the camera following the ball in 1st vid changes angle too soon, follow it a bit more and then turn for the watcher to see the logo; the vid does need to be a bit faster and for a connection to the content, instead of cutting the intro short, you can make the character pop out and do something

what did u use to make that vid?

the first one is pretty cool, and the suggestions posted here are pretty close to what I would have suggested. i would pick another tune, since it (and other very similar beats with teeny tiny alterations) is so damn overused, it makes it pretty annoying to me. idk, cool animations though. id work on the first one and perfect it to your liking.

Keep them short, 5 seconds is long enough. I always skip long intros, people want to see the content, not an intro!

nice 2nd one

• The intro is not that bad, seen worse.
• Remember to keep intro to 5-10secounds.
• The longer the intro is the less boring it needs to be. Effects,Fitting to the music,Unique,Various Ideas.
• Everything doesn't need to be done in cinema 4d, You will learn more by time, look for tutorials or Look at other peoples intros for ideas.