On the roadside, as I am breathing, I feel the life of me leaVe my body, just like the liquid left the can a few minutes ago.
There is no rretribution for me. I have sined. I led my life rightfully, until this very moment, until this very last moment.
I ddn't expect this. I wanted the end to be quiet. I wanted people to never mention my name again, I wanted them... not to grief. But now, there shall be grief.
Shall your souls find a peaceful asylum, away from me, Kids. I have failed, but there shall not be a mortal punishment for me.
I love you.

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R.I.P. in peace :(

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Rest In Peace in peace? :|

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That depends, did he dieded?

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I never manage to figure out these kind of puzzle giveaways.

Please, think of the stupid ones too ;(

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Its too hard!

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Pay attention.

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I did try. Found 5 characters. No numbers, two of the letters capital.

Still no luck.

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Are you adding them correctly to where they should be? (:

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I'm a doofus. Forgot to .... :P

Now it works! Thanks :D

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I always knew that was the case, I did the same when I first started. I just didn't want to spoil it for you. Also, you should edit your comment and take that out, so people don't realize the mistake they're doing (:

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Bum. That's right... I'm missing a character :[

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i think i have all but it doesnt match.

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Oh god... all I can think of saying is: Forgive me Father

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so hint helped ?

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Read the tag of the image(s) my friend ;]

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Solved

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Bump

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Lovely :3

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I think I have all but still apparenty i'm missing something :( I'm stuck

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A kind bump for a kind poet.

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What a poetic, if a bit depressing, puzzle. Thanks.

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bump :)

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Blacklisted for grammar mistakes!

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bump

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bumping

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Bumpity.

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Bump for the brain pain :(

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bump, good puzzle, i didnt know what to do at first

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At the top of the mountain, by the end of the road, there is a man. He shakes and trembles with every heaving breath. The only thing he still holds a firm grip on is the can on his hands. It weighs the world, even though its contents were long emptied.

They made him believe he had sined. Made him believe he had wronged. On that very last moment, they told him it was his fault. Perhaps it was to ease his death, to make their efforts smaller in containing him. To make him think it was the right thing to do.

"Rhobenn, let go of the can." He did. "Against the wall." He was. "Turn around." He hesitated.

"TURN!" He obeyed. For the very last time, he did what he was told.

He wasn't expecting this. He wanted the end to be quiet. I wanted people to never mention his name again, he wanted them... not to grief.

The world turned black with a loud BANG. His name uttered the last time by the lady who opened the door that afternoon.

"Don't miss him, he's not worth ya trouble, m'am."

She grieved. On the small red tinted piece of paper the officer had handed her, she found his handwriting. The same one she had grown used to seeing in those letters from long ago. It was the last and saddest of them all.

"I have failed, but there shall not be a mortal punishment for me.
I love you."

Her knees hit the floor and finally, there was silence once more.

Notes: I really like to write. Loved it. Compare this with "Rpbns4ever" original post to make more sense. His name on Steam is stated as "Rhobenn". Whether that's true or not, it's what I used. This is by no means the solution to the puzzle and it does not lead to hidden GAs.

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Three hours have passed since I saw this. I'm still unable to find a worthy comment. Good Job

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That comment made me feel worthy, sir.

bows

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Bump for awesomeness. . . and feels

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Bump for much noir.

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Thanks!

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