check out my comedy livestream from fall 2020 on youtube — i’m proud of it and you’ll probably get some laughs out of it. i’d love comments on the video telling me your favorite part!
I've only watched a bit of the video, but I can see why you're proud of it; it's funny with genuinely good jokes!
But I do think they need some editing, to make the most of the humor. For example, the first one "high voltage." I got it, it was funny. But everything after the punchline fell like you were explaining it: the voltage falling down, the squirrels being fine. None of that added anything to the joke anymore, I feel.
Similarly, with the protest signs. I thought the protest signs would be the traffic signs. And throughout the entire setup, I was hoping the punchline would drop. The punchline was funny, but it could work with far less setup.
When you were beating your GPS arrival time, but got delayed due to construction, I was hoping you'd refer back to the protest signs.
thanks for the specific feedback! good point to consider whether expanding on the idea actually adds to it. i was trying to make a funny idea into a bit of a story on the fly but maybe i should actually plan it out and tune it better. it's a lot of fun to make up the details on the spot, but there are definitely points where i felt like i stumbled a little.
Thanks for the giveaway!
Comment has been collapsed.
Hope to win 🤩🤩🤩
Comment has been collapsed.
Thank you for the chance
Comment has been collapsed.
Thanks
Comment has been collapsed.
Thank you for the chance!
Comment has been collapsed.
Thanks for this giveaway! <3
Comment has been collapsed.
Thanks!
Comment has been collapsed.
nostalgic game, thaks for the chance
Comment has been collapsed.
Thanks!!!
Comment has been collapsed.
Thank you for this giveaway :)
Comment has been collapsed.
thks for chance
Comment has been collapsed.
best wishes for all
Comment has been collapsed.
I really want this... Thank you for a change of winning.
Comment has been collapsed.
amazing ! ♥
Comment has been collapsed.
Thank you!
Comment has been collapsed.
I've only watched a bit of the video, but I can see why you're proud of it; it's funny with genuinely good jokes!
But I do think they need some editing, to make the most of the humor. For example, the first one "high voltage." I got it, it was funny. But everything after the punchline fell like you were explaining it: the voltage falling down, the squirrels being fine. None of that added anything to the joke anymore, I feel.
Similarly, with the protest signs. I thought the protest signs would be the traffic signs. And throughout the entire setup, I was hoping the punchline would drop. The punchline was funny, but it could work with far less setup.
When you were beating your GPS arrival time, but got delayed due to construction, I was hoping you'd refer back to the protest signs.
Just my 2 cents.
Comment has been collapsed.
thanks for the specific feedback! good point to consider whether expanding on the idea actually adds to it. i was trying to make a funny idea into a bit of a story on the fly but maybe i should actually plan it out and tune it better. it's a lot of fun to make up the details on the spot, but there are definitely points where i felt like i stumbled a little.
Comment has been collapsed.
thanks
Comment has been collapsed.
hope to win!
Comment has been collapsed.
good luck to all
Comment has been collapsed.
Thank you for this giveaway :)
Comment has been collapsed.
Have a nice day !
Comment has been collapsed.
THX~
Comment has been collapsed.
Thanks! Good luck to everyone ^^
Comment has been collapsed.