first up here is the train my first aswell ;p

I made a small android game that i have released on google play for free and i would really like to get some feedback on both the game and the art since it is the first time i have tried to make any of that but i still think it came out pretty good for a first time but i would still like to hear some of your opinions.

The game is made in unity
C# for coding
Made all the art with aseprite.
I have never made any pixel art before but this was very easy to use so I would definitely recommend it and it's only 15$

to do list:
i want to make some new art for it but since im still new to the whole pixel art drawing that might take a bit

also planing on adding touch controls and maybe some swipe controls idk yet stil taking idears ;p

adding some more backgrounds and maybe planets for the background (that is disable since they can be distracting

i also want to add some more spaceships that you can unlock

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Thanks for the train, quite a nice one. :)

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bump! top train! Thank you

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Thanks for the wishlist games! And good luck with your video game making :D We need more game makers!!

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Congratulations on the game you created! It looks nice, but I own an iPhone: P

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Now that's a quality train right there!

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Congrats on your game. Sorry I couldn't test it

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This was a fantastic ride. Thank you so much.

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I don't have android unfortunately. Thanks a lot for the train and congratulations for your game!

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Thanks for the train!

I tried your game, it's hard. :)

It works fine on my rooted Nexus 6 with adblock (sorry...). I must say right away that I am not at all a fan of tilt controls in games, so that will color my opinion. :) The controls felt laggy to me, I have to predict where the next asteroid will fall because the ship is too slow to react to it once it is visible on-screen. So from that aspect it feels a bit like randomness/luck plays as much of a part as my poor skill.

Graphics are not bad, not great either. In this state I think the game is more about the gameplay anyway. Unless you were able to afford some really wonderful graphics I don't think it'll matter too much. So I think the graphics are fine as they stand.

I'm trying the game while I'm supposed to be working, so I have no sound... so I cannot comment on that. :P
and another reason with tilt controls -- it's too obvious that i'm not working!

Should you ever implement an alternative control scheme, I would suggest either a swiping motion where the movement of the ship follows the relative movement of your finger (even if your finger is not touching the ship -- move my finger up 1cm and ship moves up 1cm, and so on). As an example of what I mean look at Image Striker Or, if you would prefer a simple left/right tap buttons I would suggest to make the entire left half of the screen be the "left" button and entire right half of the screen be the "right" button. (Compared to games which have a tiny button on-screen and it's sometimes hard to press accurately if you're playing on a big tablet or tiny phone or whatever.)

My high score is only 6 points so far, so I don't know about how (or if) there is any progression as you get deeper into the game, or if it's more of the same thing forever until you crash.

But for a first game I think you've done a great job! :) And it works for me, with no apparent bugs, which is always a good thing. :P

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Thanks a lot for the feedback :)

First about the controls ones i got used to the tilt controls it was not a problem but I'll try to make a bit smoother
and i have been thinking about adding either a joystick you can move to the left and right or adding buttons
also the left screen is the "left" button, right screen is "right" button is a really good idea i will definitely try making something like that :)

about the graphics i wanted to make everything myself so i had to go for something simple since i'm not good at drawing and this was my first time making any pixel art so i am happy with how it looks but yeah it could definitely need some improvements :)

as for the sounds there is only a few and they dont really sound that good if i have to be honest but again i wanted to make everything myself :p

and last but not least right now it's designed to be a "fast" game kinda like flappy bird or games like that where the game is just hard from the start but it never gets faster so when you die it's your "own" fault since i don't really like games where you have to spend like 10 minutes just to lose at the last second and have to start over again just to beat your own score :)

Ones again thanks a lot for the feedback i really appreciate it :D

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No problem! I definitely understand about wanting to do it all yourself. That is the best way to learn.

I will keep it installed and follow along if you make any updates in the future. :)

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Solid train, congrats on the game!

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Thanks for the great train.

And congratulations on your first game. I'd try it but it says it's not compatible with my device, sorry :)

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Worth at least 3 bumps.

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bumped the great train and good luck for the game

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Bump some amazing stuff there

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