Happy Cakeday!
A couple tips: in the context, 'create' should be 'created'
And in everyday English, we use contractions, so 'could not' is usually 'couldn't' and 'did not' would be 'didn't'
Your English sounds a bit formal, but it's all correct. :)
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Happy Cake Day, BIackCat! :3
Thank you for your giveaways!
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