Hi there! :D
I would like to be given a chance at becoming a successful steam curator!
Here are some of my reviews, I would greatly appreciate if you were to read them and comment your opinions
SAMOLIOTIC review
Duck Game review
Lowglow review

Please tell me all your opinions about these reviews :)

Here is my review Steam Group and this is my Curator Page please follow me <3

I will try replying to everyone.

Also if you are a developer and you wish me to review any of your games please send me a friend request to My Profile or send me an email here --> Santuxlmao@gmail.com

thanks for reading :D (also dont forget to bump!)

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bump

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Check you reviews for typos.

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what do you mean?

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"Phisics", "plataformer",..

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is it wrong to put "phisics" and "plataformer" I do put them in...

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He's saying they're spelled wrong - the correct spellings are "physics" and "platformer"

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ahhhh ty

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I agree, you need to correct a lot of spelling errors.

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The game's = The game is

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will change it! :3

8 years ago
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In which review? Because in the one I am reading game's is correct :P (the next 's isn't :P)

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I changed it in the SAMOLIOTIK review

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ok I also just noticed duck game has the same mistake

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By the way consists has no ' as well ;)

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The SAMOLIOTIK one started "The game's gameplay" but he already changed it to just gameplay which sounds better anyway.

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And you think "The game is gameplay" was the correct way?

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no I don't think its correct so.. I changed it :3

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No I was pointing out that the game's means the game is and not possessive for game.

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English is my second native language, don't live in England so I sometimes make stupid grammar mistakes.... thanks for pointing them out tho!

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No problem. Neither am I but my english has improved quite a lot since I started watching TV exclusivly over the internet ;)

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I could have sworn 'The gameplay of the game' has a possessive form that goes 'The game's gameplay'...

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I was pretty sure but after a doing a little research you seem to be right. In this particular case I would still stick with just gameplay to avoid repetition.

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You can start by blackmailing Devs ^^

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Any particular method or Devs I should start with? :b

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Digital Homicide are probably open to bribes...

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oh god!... no... not him...

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Use all of the methods available, on every single Dev. Why make exceptions and discriminations? :D

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Succesful... Maybe not. How about notorious.

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I'll take it

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Go for being unique instead of being succesful ;)

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unique is already taken ;(

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That's.... rude.

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I think SillyScream has a point. There are already plenty of people reviewing games in English. You should consider writing reviews in your native language. You might not reach as many people but for those you do the reviews will be more relevant.
I'm sure there's plenty of people who don't speak English and would appreciate reviews in their native language.

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Accurate, sadly. Your grammar is mostly correct but uses the very simple form. Normally simple English in reviews is good, but after a certain point it just screams "not native speaker" in a wrong way.
Plus, well, as it was pointed out, write these in a word processor or in something with a spellcheck. Your spelling is terrible in some places. Just to give you one sentence:

Duck Game is a single/multy player action plataformer in wich you play as a duck.

-> Duck Game is a single or multiplayer action-platformer, in which you play as a duck.

Also, don't hide the numerical rating behind a spoiler tag. You are hiding the most important part of the review.

You have potential and you try to focus on the aspects of the games you deem important, but your language and writing skills still need quite a bit of work. In time, you may become a good reviewer, but that is not now.

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Thanks a lot for your tips! My 2nd native language is Spanish... the reason I don't want to post reviews in Spanish is simply because I don't like the Spanish gaming community I feel way better with English speakers. In the end I am English, only problem is I have never been to an English school so I can basically speak English perfectly but I lack of grammar... I will try correcting my errors with time and I will also try writing reviews on the browser, which has a grammar corrector. Yet again thanks for your tips!

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Any particular reason you hide your rating behind spoiler tags? It seems strange to me.

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I think it captures the reader's attention

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Fair enough! I did immediately scroll over it before reading the full review.

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AHA! Thanks for your honesty, that means it's working! I was doubting if I should change it or not... You just made up my mind! :)

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Thanks for all your help! 1 more question though since you seem to know more about this than I do... Is there any way of getting game keys from devs for review purposes?

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Thanks for everything! Cheers!

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