ok I also just noticed duck game has the same mistake
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The SAMOLIOTIK one started "The game's gameplay" but he already changed it to just gameplay which sounds better anyway.
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No I was pointing out that the game's means the game is and not possessive for game.
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English is my second native language, don't live in England so I sometimes make stupid grammar mistakes.... thanks for pointing them out tho!
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No problem. Neither am I but my english has improved quite a lot since I started watching TV exclusivly over the internet ;)
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I was pretty sure but after a doing a little research you seem to be right. In this particular case I would still stick with just gameplay to avoid repetition.
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I think SillyScream has a point. There are already plenty of people reviewing games in English. You should consider writing reviews in your native language. You might not reach as many people but for those you do the reviews will be more relevant.
I'm sure there's plenty of people who don't speak English and would appreciate reviews in their native language.
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Accurate, sadly. Your grammar is mostly correct but uses the very simple form. Normally simple English in reviews is good, but after a certain point it just screams "not native speaker" in a wrong way.
Plus, well, as it was pointed out, write these in a word processor or in something with a spellcheck. Your spelling is terrible in some places. Just to give you one sentence:
Duck Game is a single/multy player action plataformer in wich you play as a duck.
-> Duck Game is a single or multiplayer action-platformer, in which you play as a duck.
Also, don't hide the numerical rating behind a spoiler tag. You are hiding the most important part of the review.
You have potential and you try to focus on the aspects of the games you deem important, but your language and writing skills still need quite a bit of work. In time, you may become a good reviewer, but that is not now.
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Thanks a lot for your tips! My 2nd native language is Spanish... the reason I don't want to post reviews in Spanish is simply because I don't like the Spanish gaming community I feel way better with English speakers. In the end I am English, only problem is I have never been to an English school so I can basically speak English perfectly but I lack of grammar... I will try correcting my errors with time and I will also try writing reviews on the browser, which has a grammar corrector. Yet again thanks for your tips!
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Thanks for all your help! 1 more question though since you seem to know more about this than I do... Is there any way of getting game keys from devs for review purposes?
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