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! - Starting up another Giveaway right as this one ends - !

http://www.steamgifts.com/giveaway/nL9mw/red-faction-armageddon

http://www.steamgifts.com/giveaway/RKIdK/tripwire-interactive-bundle

Here's a game I already owned, and I really don't need it, it comes in the form of a key.

Feedback

While not a requirement, I'd like some constructive criticism towards the content of my page, from anyone, or someone. If I could get some feedback in that direction, I'd appreciate it. My own friends may.. not exactly be giving me the kind of answers I wanted.

http://katoweb.org - is my personal website, and little bit of a blog. Check it out, leave a comment, I'd appreciate it here, or there. I don't think any rules were broken.

thanks

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Thanks a lot! :)

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Thanks. :)

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thx

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Thank you!

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thank you

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Thanks (:

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Personally I don't like pure white websites. I can deal with them, as seen with SG... although SG is actually a slight off-white, but I prefer them to not be pure white.

Other than that, the colors seem to go well together (ignoring my preference for background color), but there's not really that much there to critique.

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Yes, white themes are much easier on the eyes, I can likely make tweaks to it, but I need to do some consideraton, I've moved to a new platform, I previously developed my content engines, but have moved to wordpress, in order to be more modern. That and the support was much higher, and there had existed a plethora of features already.

I was really looking for some content critique, but that's fine. I appreciate the feedback, and the comment, thank you very much for spending your time to write this out.

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I addressed the color issue a few days ago, and if you're able to receive this comment, by notification, or in some way. I'd love to hear your reply, if to see if it were a little easier on your eyes, and maybe to see if I require more modifications, and edits.

I appreciate the feedback, thank you very much.

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Thanks !

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I checked out your site and just wanted to say that I don't lose interest when I'm reading your posts. Your writing sounds very natural, casual but organized (I wish I could write as organized as you do!).

As for content, maybe you could make your posts less specific to a certain game. I see you've posted quite often regarding LOL. sometimes I thought I was perusing a LOL guidesite! (But it's your personal blog, and you've invested many hours into the game, so that's understandable.) Maybe you could share your thoughts on the video game industry in general, for instance the direction that video games are taking? Since it's your personal blog, it doesn't have an exact topic of discussion, but to increase traffic on your site you might want to discuss topics which would interest more than the people in one niche (like maybe make a post on games which have depth in their gameplay and reference several games instead of limiting the post to League).

Also, I enjoyed the one short story you had on there, and I would definitely like to read more of your works!

Overall, I like your writing style, and I wish you the best of luck in maintaining your blog. Hope you can get something from a high schooler's opinion.

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I think I unintentionally implied that your blog was catering to a niche of video gamers, because the context of your blog is this site. I didn't mean to, and I don't think you are making it such a blog! But my opinions still stand.

And for some reason, my first post didn't have paragraph breaks. :/

EDIT: Thankfully, there is an edit button :)

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I appreciate the feedback, and thanks. It really helps. I realize I need to bring more topics to the table. League is the most thing that I play. I very much know a lot about it, and play it in my free time. I'm currently playing another game Warframe, and plan to play Age of Empires 2 HD.

I'm still looking into that, I won't really write a review, but I'm trying to figure out really, what I can express, or talk about. I like a lot of things, but narrowing down things that are interesting to both writer, and reader can be difficult.

As one can drone on about many things and... very much be quite boring. I approach League because of it's popularity, and my familiarity with it. So it's good that I can express my like for it. I will consider some other things, I had planned discussions in general for technology. I like technology (Who doesn't, if you use the internet.)

In short, I made a long thing out of this, but thank you for investing your time, to give me this feedbakc, I appreciate it, and it really helps me think about what I'm doing, what kind of direction I want to take it in. I want something mutual, and expanding my borders is a good thing. I want to share my interests. As for my writing, I don't write much, as I'm trying to get back into it, I was very much dissatisfied with that work.

It ended up being more or less a rough draft, to check my comfort levels, and a few plot ideas/concepts in a generally smaller frame. I used to write things in first person, but they seem so unnatural to me now, and much more difficult to approach.

Better end this, or I'll never stop typing, thanks again.

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