Skimmed some of the writing and it looks quite good. I always prefer an oxford comma whereas you often go without, but that's not a big deal ;p Sorry I didn't read more, its already late and my attention span isn't stellar to start with ;p
Ahhh commas. I've never been to great with them. And no worries, I wasn't expecting people to genuinely read it anyways, so you have my deepest appreciation.
Wow, your work looks striking! Saving ti and hopefully will read soon...
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ay tyvm, it's still in progress but as it's on a google docs I can just keep working on it with no sweat haha.
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It is looking good so far! Not my usual read, so I won't give any in-depth commentary, but you have a good foundation, it will probably turn out well.
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Thankyou very much, thanks for taking the time, especially as its not something you'd usually read.
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Skimmed some of the writing and it looks quite good. I always prefer an oxford comma whereas you often go without, but that's not a big deal ;p Sorry I didn't read more, its already late and my attention span isn't stellar to start with ;p
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Ahhh commas. I've never been to great with them. And no worries, I wasn't expecting people to genuinely read it anyways, so you have my deepest appreciation.
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I don't think the oxford comma is a necessary right or wrong, its just preference (if I understand correctly). I'm pretty bad at writing myself ;P
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Thanks a bunch! Activated and marked received :)
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